• use common/cliché rhymes, like “love” with “up above”
• tell a lot, but don’t show with moments or specific details
• awkwardly rearrange grammar to fit a rhyme, especially reversing subject and object order (“with you I long to be”)
• are achingly personal, yet express deep painful emotions entirely through clichés
• show either how much you hurt, so all a person reading it can say is “damn, that sucks,” or
• how in love you are, without revealing one original specific detail about your boy/girlfriend
• repeat words for dramatic effect (“we were lost, lost on an island…”)
• set up a rhythm, then have a line go many syllables too long but still rhyme
• are pseudo-deep (mention “shades of gray”)
Note: bad poems can feel good to write: they help you vent. So go ahead. Just know that when you share them, they are therapy more than poetry.
Oh, the pain of how you broke, broke my heart I liked you much but you don’t care Instead you ditched me before prom I wore some flowers in my hair That itched because you I got them from But it was good I had flowers my lonely prom to bring Because you made me feel like dirt My heart you broke, broke like a broken thing Like a clock or a parking meter or a ripped shirt The knife you stuck in my heart, my aching heart, shone like bling bling But it really really really really hurt. --Mya Hartabroka | I love you You make me feel so good Like nobody else So happy I’m so into you I love you so much So much it hurts But the pain feels good Good because it’s you I feel I love your eyes, your hair, The way you do the things you do I love everything about you The way you dress, the way you look at me I just love you so much It’s freaking unbelievable Ouch! Ouch! Much! Much! Me love! You! You! --Drippy Drivel |
Broken Love A tear falls down my cheek my cheek of broken love My heart is like a waterfall flooding with broken love I feel so alone without you I have no one who understands me If you were to search me All you would find is broken love The flowers are not so sweet The sky filled with beautiful stars is not so beautiful My vision is clouded with broken love My breathing is shallow like a shallow pool I would drown in my own breath I cannot swim I cannot breathe I am drowning in broken love Like a dog with no friends lying out in the rain I am alone with my broken love I walk Broken love I speed walk Broken love I canter Broken love I run slowly Broken love I sprint, I sprint | I am a Lamb Caught in the Snow You thought I was stronger, but I am weak You are weak! No strength to be gentle You hurt me, I am weak I am naked in a snow storm screaming What do I do? What do I do? You branded my cloudy wool with Scorching heat of greed and selfishness You denied my love I deny your pain-inflicting words Just a lamb, just a lamb That's all I am, all that I am Your jagged icicle words are impaling my heart How can you do this to me? Stop this avalanche on my soul Baah! Baah! Black sheep have you any wool? I am cold, I am cold. --Emily Seager |
In the following poem, Steve Martin (in his first book, Cruel Shoes) takes a slightly different approach, riffing on the style of pretentious romantic nature poetry, using lots of nonsense lines that sort of seem to mean something.
Oh Mercy, The Prose-Poem Tryptch! I Semblances of spring, I told her, come like daisies suddenly tumbling winter’s sky. Doves, I said, are seen in an instant, carelessly glimpsed. Histories tell of moments only, ages strung on unseen slips of spider’s silk. Gifts they are, I said. II Melancholy selves tell several relations of senseless involvement in things of myself and things of the past, and things much less likely than a summer’s rain, or a gaslamp. III “Oh listen! There are poets on the hill!” Then turn your head toward skied sparrows. Say: “ Poets! lift your arms for us, come in the meadowed fields with limbs of saddened noggins! Tell us of corn, of summer, of crowds, but most of all, tell us of the bouquets in your heads!” --Steve Martin |
Below is a nice card (cover, then inside) made by Alex Barry that I think covers one bad poem sentiment pretty well: